Mwalimu Joshua Njenga has poked holes in the Buckingham Palace statement issued on Tuesday, March 9 with regard to Prince Harry and Meghan interview with Oprah.
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In a post he shared on his Facebook page, Njenga highlighted the 'errors' that were made in the statement, introducing the words he thought would be appropriate
According to Njenga, the statement was faulty right from the header to its body, pointing out the unnecessary wordiness that had been carried therein. His confidence to challenge the statement has left many tickled, given it was by the perceived owners of the English language.
Dear Buckingham Palace,
In my morning class, we discussed the difference between active and passive writing, and we used your statement for practice.
I asked my students to rewrite it using active language.
Here is what they did.
Have a great day.
Mwalimu Joshua Njenga
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